Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage
It appears that you are missing a comma or two with the interrupter First of all. Consider adding the comma(s).
The verb benefits does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.
It appears that the quantifier a great deal does not fit with the countable noun opportunities. Consider changing the quantifier or the noun.
The spelling of laborers is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
The spelling of unfavorable is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
The noun phrase environment seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase domestic market seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that the preposition in may be incorrect in this context. Consider changing it.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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