You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter because

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would like to buy some electrical

equipments

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equipment

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from your

shop

. As my friends

refers

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me to buy electrical stuff only from your

shop

because your

shop

is the only

shop

where people can get their products easily and

on

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good price. I want some new or updated version of hp laptop intel core i8 and sony 1000x wireless

headphone

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headphones

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. According to the popularity of these products in the

market

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i

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need to know when these will good available in your store and what the price of these items

.

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, how long you will be able to hold the goods because

i

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am out of town and

i

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will come back by

next

week.

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, both those items are so important for me and if you will hold for just for 1 week and that would be really

graetfull

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grateful

and if you

want

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discuss

about

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something of those products you can call me on 64715155454 .

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Yours

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faithfully Simranjeet Singh