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Some say job security is more important than job satisfaction. What is your opinion?

#say #job #security #satisfaction
It is indeed true that a feeling of
fulfillment
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 and enjoyment that a person desires from their
job
 is known as
job
satisfaction
. It is often debated that in
this
 era of
u
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ncertain
job
 market, security is ought to be more significant over
job
satisfaction
.
However
 in my contention happily doing work is always a better choice
that
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 satisfies the soul. Apparently, there are many reasons why people opt for
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self satisfying
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job
 over a permanent
job
. Primarily the health benefits offered by
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ontent mind which can
also
 aid in getting creative thoughts.
For instance
, many companies like Amex, google pay a lot
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attention to a healthy work environment and employee
satisfaction
 so that they can reap a lot of benefits like more productivity, loyal employee, maintaining good office environment etc. Working place which gives you pleasure not only helps you to grow in
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rofessional field, it will
also
 help you to keep a good family bond and lead a
stress free
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life
.
However
, some believe that
a
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life
 long employment is more significant than just mental
satisfaction
 because we get a constant inflow of money.
Also
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we get an assurance than we can take care of our dependants. To exemplify, when a family immigrates to a new country, the chief objective is to get a
job
 so that we can put the food on the table,
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doing duty out of no interest will lead to frustration and friction among colleges. Majority of people are doing those jobs which they dislike,
hence
 it increases the temperament of citizen these days. To avoid
such
 bad scenarios people generally keep searching for the
job
 of their field and later switch once they get it.
Hence
 everybody if after attaining the mental, financial and emotional
satisfaction
 in their
job
. Having dwelled on
such
 thought it is clear that
job
satisfaction
 is the utmost priority than just earning
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alary.
Job
satisfaction
 delivers immense pleasure and interest to attain huge success in
life
 and leading a joyous
life
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job security
  • job satisfaction
  • financial stability
  • consistent income
  • basic needs
  • future plans
  • personal fulfillment
  • life quality
  • psychological impacts
  • stress
  • burnout
  • lack of motivation
  • job market
  • adaptability
  • continuous learning
  • gig economy
  • trade-off
  • safety net
  • mental well-being
  • priorities
  • life stages
  • young professionals
  • career success
  • nearing retirement
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