One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

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Cities across the globe have advanced in infrastructure, which has lead to
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decade, major metropolitan cities in my country have expanded, acquiring and gathering more land under
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jurisdiction. The reason for the above is the increase in population. It is human nature to keep migrating to different cities
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better employment opportunities. Due to the lack of companies situated in smaller towns, people who reside in these towns are bound to move to larger cities.
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is the beginning of over-population in larger cities, that leads to
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congestion
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. The taxes on purchasing a 2/4 wheeler in India is much lesser as compared to other countries, which results in one's desire to own a vehicle.
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people grumble about the
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and enormous hours spent on the road travelling to and fro on a daily basis, yet they prefer travelling via their own vehicle. In order to solve
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problem, the Government is trying to provide various means of public transport across the city,
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but the problem lies in the fact that the services are not seamless. In recent years, many start-ups have risen to enable people to hail shared rides to reduce the
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, but yet it has only increased the menace. In my opinion, private companies who are solving for
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should work together with the Government, to solve for
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connectivity problems that currently public transport is not able to solve for.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • urban population
  • public transportation
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • economic strength
  • consumerism
  • car ownership
  • commuting
  • peak hours
  • public transit
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing
  • remote work
  • flexible working hours
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion charges
  • traffic management systems
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