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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

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Most people in Ukraine prefer to watch
the
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foreign movies than films created locally. People have many reasons why they prefer foreign movies.
However
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the
government
 can be involved in
this
 sphere and help to develop the film
industry
 in their own country to increase interest in local films. I believe, one of the important reasons why people prefer foreign movies is the high quality of the image and visual effects. If a
movie
 director has a good plot and has a professional cast it will be a huge possibility for success.
As a result
, the success of foreign movies is a huge number of the
high level
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 professionals who are involved in
p
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roduction and the huge amount of
money
that is
 invested in it.
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 example of
this
was films
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 which were based on marvel comics "Avengers". In my point of view, the
government
 must be involved in developing the film
industry
 in our country. The
government
 can help not only with finance,
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also
 with control and responsibility
about
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 spending
this
money
. I think after these measures we will have a successful
movie
industry
 and all investment will come back with benefits in future. In conclusion
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I want to say, for the
government
 to develop the film
industry
 extremely
important
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 and involve people to look at the local films,
moreover
 share these movies with the other countries. If spectators are over the moon after some
movie
 they will spend
money
for
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 the tickets,and
shere
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share
 information about it. It helps to earn
money
, share culture and influence people from other countries. Good example "Lord of the rings' which
shooted
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 in New Zealand. After
this
movie
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a huge number of tourists came to
this
 country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Cultural exchange
  • Cinematic expertise
  • Diverse narratives
  • Enriching cultural experience
  • Linguistic proficiency
  • Cinematography advancements
  • Government subsidies
  • Promote local talent
  • Economic sustainability
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