Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

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Most people in Ukraine prefer to watch

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foreign movies than films created locally. People have many reasons why they prefer foreign movies.

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the

government

can be involved in

this

sphere and help to develop the film

industry

in their own country to increase interest in local films. I believe, one of the important reasons why people prefer foreign movies is the high quality of the image and visual effects. If a

movie

director has a good plot and has a professional cast it will be a huge possibility for success.

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, the success of foreign movies is a huge number of the

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professionals who are involved in

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roduction and the huge amount of

money

that is

invested in it.

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example of

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was films

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which were based on marvel comics "Avengers". In my point of view, the

government

must be involved in developing the film

industry

in our country. The

government

can help not only with finance,

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also

with control and responsibility

about

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spending

this

money

. I think after these measures we will have a successful

movie

industry

and all investment will come back with benefits in future. In conclusion

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I want to say, for the

government

to develop the film

industry

extremely

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and involve people to look at the local films,

moreover

share these movies with the other countries. If spectators are over the moon after some

movie

they will spend

money

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the tickets,and

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information about it. It helps to earn

money

, share culture and influence people from other countries. Good example "Lord of the rings' which

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in New Zealand. After

this

movie

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a huge number of tourists came to

this

country.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Globalization
Cultural exchange
Cinematic expertise
Diverse narratives
Enriching cultural experience
Linguistic proficiency
Cinematography advancements
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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

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Some People prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoiding changes. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

In the past important knowledge and history were stored in the museum. Nowadays information is freely available on the Internet therefore is no longer a need for museums. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In over to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behaviors. Do you agree or disagree.

people believe that it is better to build new museums and town halls instead of renovating the old ones. Are you agree or desagree?