Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include: – Why you want to work in a different country – What type of work you will be looking for – Questions you have about working in a different country that your friend may be able to answer

Dear

Tairan

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Taiwan

, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to let you know my interest to work in abroad, and

also

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asking

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asked

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you to

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provide some

information

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regarding

this

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. I decided to work outside of the country for two reasons.

Firstly

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, working overseas will be

condusive

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conducive

for me to progress my career because having experience of working in many nations added extra

values

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value

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the curriculum vitae.

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, I would like to travel and get acquainted with various cultures to enhance my level or horizon. I would like to work in the field of

information

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technology

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apply

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abroad, because I have extensive

peofessional

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professional

experience in

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sector, and

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graduated in the same subject.

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, I will feel comfortable

to perform

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duties if I

recruited

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am recruited

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for

the

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apply

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simillar

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similar

tasks. As you have walked

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this

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path before and already have experience of working in many countries, I hope you can help me by providing some valuable

information

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. Yet, I have not selected any country to move on; so, it would be great if you suggest

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to me

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which state will be best for me considering my profile. It

also

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will be appreciated if you provide me

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with an

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idea of nation wise job opportunities, remuneration and living standard. Please visit my place in the

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vacation, and accommodate me with

these

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this information

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information

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as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours loving, Nipa

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Nov 23, 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

236 words

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