The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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Many nations are going through unimaginable city
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, an individual working or selling in the streets is liable to get sick or congested lungs from the pollution outside as compared to another individual working inside a building. Motor vehicles
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out carbon monoxide.
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burning biomass and poor air quality due to dust storms.
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intended for human consumption is being wasted or lost, and it occurs
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people dispose of
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society. To conclude, I firmly agree that the citizens are completely handicapped in finding
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organizations and those in power should come together to eradicate these pollutants sweeping through the corners of the environment.
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