The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Many nations are going through unimaginable city
harzards
. With the hope that something can be done, the government is being looked upon for directions on Correct your spelling
hazards
this
matter. This
essay will elaborate on the above topic leading to the many causes of environmental pollution issues in the
society.
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Firstly
, research shows that millions of people die every year because of air pollution. This
is likely due to the fact that 9 out of 10 breathe in air that contains h
igh level of pollutant. Add an article
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For example
, an individual working or selling in the streets is liable to get sick or congested lungs from the pollution outside as compared to another individual working inside a building. Motor vehicles is
another Change the verb form
are
pollutants
that Replace the adjective
pollutant
oozes
out carbon monoxide. Change the verb form
ooze
This
is serious because it can lead to to
burning biomass and poor air quality due to dust storms.
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Secondly
, food
intended for human consumption is being wasted or lost, and it occurs in
different levels. Verify preposition usage
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on
For example
, in developing countries food
waste occurs at the post-harvest and processing level, were
people dispose of Replace the word
where
food
that did not make it to harvest. Another one is the retail and consumer level, were food
is deemed to be "too ugly" to be sold to consumers. Hence
, causing retail stores to put aside any fruit that is
rotten. In this
case, it could pose as a form of insecurity in the
society.
To conclude, I firmly agree that the citizens are completely handicapped in finding Remove the article
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solutons
to Correct your spelling
solutions
thia
predicament. Correct your spelling
this
Therefore
, the govenment
and other bodies Correct your spelling
government
such
as non governmental
organizations and those in power should come together to eradicate these pollutants sweeping through the corners of the environment.Add a hyphen
non-governmental
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