The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, technology has a very big influence on people lives, especially in more advanced and industrialized countries.
Although
its' development has a lot of advantages and one of them is decreasing the crime rate by preventing and solving crimes.
To begin
with, when you can spread the information worldwide about,
for instance
,
for instance
,a terrorist attack, people would know to look out for each other in
this
city and that it is better to stay at home.
Also
, you can just post a picture of a fugitive criminal on the Internet and there are very big chances for them to be caught.
Moreover
, it is easier to pass the knowledge to others thru the online app or on social media. Obviously, the sender has a bigger scope, which can help in the receipt the information about preventing crimes. To summarize, I think that due to the technology development the amount of committed crimes is diminishing.
For example
, the Internet and social media would be nothing without its' users. You could say that the falling crime rate is the result of combining both, people and technology.
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