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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so?

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It is an undeniable fact, that parents nowadays entice their children to look for a
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time
 job to make their free
time
 valuable. In
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we will examine the benefits and as well as the drawbacks of young pupils working at an early age.
However
, I believe that pupils should not
work
 as it can deviate their mind from studies and goal of life, for which they need to
work
 hard. Apparently, there are many benefits of doing
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time
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such
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omprehend the value of money and are able to practice
time
 management.
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they get a taste of
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eal economic world and
work
 culture.
This
 idea of utilizing their free
time
, gives them a breath of fresh air from
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monotonous
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onotonus book learning method, as they are doing it
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practically
.
For instance
, many students start their career from a restaurant,
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learning
leaving
 the
custome's
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customer's
 need and maintaining the goodwill of the
work place
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.
On the other hand
, while working and with the inflow of money
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a child may change his focus from studies to
work
 and to earn more cash. They get allured by
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ense of splurging money
hence
 a
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downfall
 in the academic studies can be seen after that.
In addition
 to
this
, the innocence of a child and happiness during the playtime will vanish, if, it gets alternated by their tiring jobs. To make the most of their free
time
, parents ought to focus on introducing brain games,
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bacus for maths or any other
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 training which will improve their cognitive skills. To recapitulate, just like a coin has its two sides, doing
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ob or working as an apprentice in free
time
 is
extremly
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extremely
 advantageous to give lessons about real economic situations.
However
, I firmly believe that a child should start looking for a job when it is the
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correct
time
. Parents should focus on introducing brain games and other lessons for their ideal
time
 to
enhence
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enhance
 their intellectual level.
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