Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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is thought by some to be the most significant approaches for obtaining a better

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. Whereas

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argue that work

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and interpersonal skills are more important.

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and why I believe that

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is much more beneficial than soft skills and developing

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. It could be argued that practical skills and

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is necessary to elevate chances of securing sufficient

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because many companies preferring

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rather than qualification.

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, some positions do not require

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, people who work as a chef usually they have natural aptitude and skill.

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, after a few years of effort and

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might success and be more productive.

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, they can start their own business and increase their income.

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, I agree with those who believe that attending the

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courses whether in

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lassroom or online and

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graduating with a good degree is vital to attain a great

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that they have already learned as well as improving student social skills when

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together in a classroom . Some student

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out a

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skill development and jobs to enhance their career professional capability while studying. Some jobs need completing

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to practise their professional

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doctors, teacher and low. To conclude,

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soft skills and

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good

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have many advantages to get a better

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I strongly believe that

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qualification is more important

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because it could wide knowledge and understanding.