Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

University

education

is thought by some to be the most significant approaches for obtaining a better

job

. Whereas

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argue that work

experience

and interpersonal skills are more important.

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job

and why I believe that

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education

is much more beneficial than soft skills and developing

experience

. It could be argued that practical skills and

experience

is necessary to elevate chances of securing sufficient

job

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because many companies preferring

experience

rather than qualification.

Furthermore

, some positions do not require

university

education

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for example

, people who work as a chef usually they have natural aptitude and skill.

However

, after a few years of effort and

experience

might success and be more productive.

Moreover

, they can start their own business and increase their income.

However

, I agree with those who believe that attending the

university

courses whether in

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lassroom or online and

then

graduating with a good degree is vital to attain a great

job

in

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that they have already learned as well as improving student social skills when

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together in a classroom . Some student

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out a

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skill development and jobs to enhance their career professional capability while studying. Some jobs need completing

university

education

to practise their professional

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doctors, teacher and low. To conclude,

although

soft skills and

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good

experience

have many advantages to get a better

job

,

but

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I strongly believe that

university

qualification is more important

,

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because it could wide knowledge and understanding.