SOME PEOPLE FEEL THAT ENTERTAINERS SUCH AS FILM STARS, POP MUSICIANS OR SPORTS STARS ARE PAID TOO MUCH MONEY. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE? WHICH OTHER TYPES OF JOB SHOULD BE HIGHLY PAID?

While a group of people think that artists and sportsmen are being paid more than they deserve ,another group think the opposite.Is it logical or not?

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essay will argue why it is not logical at all and

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of celebrities like them,who are the most deserving candidates in the race of earning more money. As we all know,entertainers like actors,singers and

sportmen

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sportsmen

have always given people a scope to run away from the monotony of their day to day life activities which people often desire to relax for some time.

Therefore

,celebrities of these sectors are

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more popular compared to that of other types.Admittedly,most of the times they are overrated and offered a huge amount for even a brief performance.They are hired at a very substantial amount that the sponsors can earn even more and achieve great publicity.

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this disproportional incomes

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of these stars give rise to

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alse sense of overconfidence which ultimately spoil them,there are many

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instances.So it is not at all logical to overpay a person having no valid

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candidacy

.

On the contrary

,there are fields on which nobody bothers to pay due attention

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as the field of research study,news reporting,

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forecasting body and so on.

Firstly

,the researchers are burning their nights working at laboratories not being noticed but on the wheels of their inventions

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world is running so smoothly.

Secondly

,the news

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are risking their lives in various hostile circumstances to unleash truth before mass media.

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,the

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forecasters are doing

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xcellent job of making people aware of the

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of tomorrow morning.But are they being paid rationally for their jobs as opposed to the stars of showbiz and football or cricket players?Not surprisingly,the answer is very disappointing and known well to all of us

that is

,no,they are not given enough money. Though we love showy things more

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there are some people who are working day and night but not being much showy and for

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reason not getting what they deserve,whereas,only because the professions get more media coverage film actors,sports celebrities,singers are being much more highlighted and

thus

providing means of more income which is totally illogical.In my opinion,

instead

of these stars the researchers,news reporters and

weather

forecasters should be paid more.