People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less. You should write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays,
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onsumption of drinks with
sugar
are
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increasing.
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is
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erious issue because it affects
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the health badly.
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essay will consider the general causes of
consumption
of drink, before proposing two solutions
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this
issue.
The one
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of the most important causes of drinking a drink is that it is tasty. Majority of people consume it because of taste.
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of
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eople are having a coke, because it is yummy. The other cause is linked with
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rize. People use
sugar
-based drinks because they are cheaper than drinks without
sugar
. Many companies replace
sugar
to many natural components, because of
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rize. Natural components are more expensive than
sugar
.
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, most
of
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atural drink with fruit are using not only fruit, they use
sugar
, water and other things.
Firstly
, people should
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that
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onsequences of drinks with
sugar
are really bad, and there are too many illnesses with
sugar
. And because of that they
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to minimize the
consumption
of drinks. There are many drinks which have a low amount of
sugar
. People can use them
instead
of
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everage with
sugar
. In conclusion, the using of
sugar
-based drinks are unhealthy and people should minimize the
consumption
of these drinks.
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