Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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common to sent elders to old-age homes.

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is supported by many , while others

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on the disadvantages in

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both merits and demerits and

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a conclusion.

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and foremost , people are living a busy life that they don't even have enough time to think nothing other than themselves. So the life of elders can be boring .

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, by admitting these elders to a nursing home , it helps them to spend their rest of life fruitfully with colleagues of similar age groups rather than killing time

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v for the entire day. Apart from that , they could engage themselves in several activities along with their new group of friends.

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special competitions for these grey heads where they can showcase their talents and feel happy and energetic.

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makes them lively and

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enjoy their

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childhood. On the flip side , putting them in some nursing homes can create a sense of depression among them since they may have expected their kids to take good care of them during old-age. They may

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wish to spend their final stage happily with their children and grandchildren.

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expectation cannot be found wrong because it is the duty of every child to take proper care of their parents during their

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times .

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, they are denying their kids the opportunity to grow up hearing nice bedtime stories, experiences and morals from their grandparents. To conclude , sending elders to old-age

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can be a good option for creating some colour full memories for them before death, but, I believe these colours are more bright and elegant when we have them with us.