The most effective way to solve the current traffic and pollution problems in cities is to encourage people to move from the suburbs or countryside into the city centre. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic congestion and air pollution are pressing issues of many countries. Many comments argue that stimulating people going into the

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centre to

work

and go back home in suburbs is the possible solution to tackle these dilemmas. In my point of view, I partially concur with

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atter in both aspects. On the one hand, it is completely possible that blue and white colour workers can commute into their workplace in

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, when the amount of transport simultaneously driving and operating in the

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that would be the most cause of

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raffic jam and rapidly increasing high carbon dioxide in the atmosphere which is the main factor of making air pollution more seriously. Thereby, commuting into the

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to

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at dissimilar timelines may be the bright idea to reduce both

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in a long run,

instead

of

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and concentrate to

work

in urban for the time being. On the flip side, the fact that not all countries have enough high-end public transports and facilities to cater

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huge demand of population incoming and running out of cities

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.

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, in Vietnam, there is a large

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of students and labours who come around the

city

to learning and working by bus,

however

, the demand of

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kind of public

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transport

is exponentially increasing and overwhelming because there

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no other means of public transportation in urban.

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, people choose self-driving as

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best choice to go to

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frequently that make the flow of transportation increased gradually and leading to the overload of public infrastructure. To sum up, commuting into

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ossible plan to some extent,

nonetheless

, it could be feasible if the public transportation systems and infrastructures are completely convenient and comfortable to suit with the need of people in difference ladder of society.