Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Some believe that educational institutions should teach students
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. While there are others who think that adolescents should be given the knowledge to be a better version of one's self. Both views will be discussed in
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a conclusion. In today's scenario getting the right
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which will define one's career is not easy, so if, universities provide necessary knowledge which will help students getting a
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will be an advantage.
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, if children are taught how to use PPT's, Microsoft excel or word at an early stage of education, they will be at advance stage of using these skill at the time of graduation, which
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ew start-up called Whitehat junior, where they teach children at the early age of six about coding and computers. As these skills are required in
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dge over others and they will have time to develop other skills as well.
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, universities should teach children with the lessons which are helpful to them in terms
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morality and a good responsible person. It's not enough to have hard skills in
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possess some soft skills which are necessary to endeavour in career, like being polite and respectful to others. As
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is a journey of up's and down's it is very important to face tough situations, schools can teach children how to handle these problems in a positive way. To conclude, educational institutions should not only equip students with hard skills for
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teach soft skills which are
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and career, as being an employee is not only the role one plays in
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