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Some people prefer one-on-one lessons, while others say it is better to study in groups. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There is always an ongoing debate towards learning on an individual based or having lessons with groupmates. In my opinion, students and teachers may find these two approaches of study styles are both advantageous as if more learning goals can be achieved. On the one hand, one-on-one lessons offer direct help to students while acting as a solution
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 learning diversity. Individual lessons are said to be suitable for some professional lessons.
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, people are learning an instrument, a language or sports on his or her own. Since every students’ learning process is probably different from the other, assistance from teachers can be addressed respectively.
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laim can be proved by a piano lesson while hardly do piano learners have a
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xtreme situation are
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 indispensable to fresh learning in diving or skating.
On the other hand
, some belief support groups lessons as to creative motivations and chance of cooperation to students. Not only do a study
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also
 build up a positive attitude during the time of helping each other. Nowadays, some schools do not put their preference
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 steaming because some studies found the benefits of mutual help from students among high and low standards.
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nstant, E-sports gamers are guided under a
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accordingly
. To conclude, one-on-one or
group
 learning can sever as many purposes. Only could the applications of these two styles be beneficial if teachers show their understanding
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 students.
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