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In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applications may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays the job market is very competitive rather than before.An employer is looking skilled professional's who can directly work with their profession nature .because If employer recruit freshers
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 they have to train themselves it would be more costly
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 whom they have holding practical knowledge about the relevant track.From my point of view In the future practical and formal experience both would be required for post-application .I am explaining with an example at below from both sides.
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it is true skills are essential for any career .So whenever recruiter hiring skills relevant jobs
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ocus on only skills .
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 as in a mechanical workshop when workshop's want to hire someone mechanical expert than probably they might look only expertise in that particular site .here formal education not getting priority .
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n-hand experience they getting more priority rather than formal qualifications .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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