Some people spend their time in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community or even better climate. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
A change in the everyday lifestyle is a prevailing improvement in human lives. Despite the fact that many people prefer living all their life in the same place, some others believe that moving places could be more beneficial.
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essay will discuss both sides and will agree with the former.
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town for a long term period is comfortable. To illustrate, some people believe that staying in Use synonyms
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, it will easily lead to having a bad mood which definitely affects their work efficiency.
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move can be a good opportunity to set some personal health, financial and wellness goals and get involved in local civic or church groups. Learning new about yourself and the community can be a positive thing. Linking Words
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as costs, time for packing up and missing family and friends.
To conclusion, from my point of views, moving to new accommodation is much better because we can attain a new experience and an enjoyable life.Linking Words
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