The film is a less important form of art and literature. To what extent do you agree?

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Creativity can be presented in all forms, through paintings, poetry, making movies, and the list goes on. While artistic and poetic

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fields

have gained

undoubtable

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undoubtedly

respect since the olden days,

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whether

movies are as relevant remains a debatable topic.

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essay will discuss that even though other subjects like drawing or writing are very valuable, in

comparision

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comparison

there should be no lack of importance given to films. It is understandable, that some people may consider painting and

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superior to film making.

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is probably

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because

they feel

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xpression of feelings through drawings or words require more skill and it is bound to

indiviuality

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individuality

individually

rather than a group of people. The reason Van

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paintings became famous after his death was because people were

asthonished

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astonished

at the beauty created by him despite his mental illness.

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, it is

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because

of these reasons people consider art and literature more important.

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, movies should be considered as valuable as any other form of art. It not only expresses emotion through audio and visual modes but

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brings people together. When we visit a cinema hall for

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emotional, thriller or horror movie we can usually hear everyone in the

audiance

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audience

have a similar response of either laughter, tears or fear. It gives people a reason to connect, and

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why in my

perosnal

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personal

opinon

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opinion

feature films should be as important. In conclusion, even though

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different

subjects like paintings and writing are held in high regards, we cannot negate the fact that motion pictures should be given similar relevance in the world or creative arts. In my personal opinion movies should be considered of equal importance if not more when compared to art and literature.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

286 words

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The film is a less important form of art and literature. To what extent do you agree?

Fully explain your ideas

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The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasingnumbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

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