Parents and teachers make many rules for children to encourage good behaviour and protect them from danger. However, children would benefit from fewer rules and greater freedom.

It is widely believed that having some rules and restrictions can pave the way for a surpassed behaviour of children and lead them to

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levels of dangerous conditions which they may face

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minimal regulatory and expanded independence approach might create many more chances for children, other contradictory factors should

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be taken into account.

Firstly

, the discipline has been accepted as one of the most effective ways for parents to

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their sons and daughters to be curious in gaining better manners

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and help them

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high moral standards. Children being upbrought by specific rules and regime

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seem to have

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,

such

as a regular sleep time, diets consisting of mostly healthy food and others.

Secondly

, those rules occur to play a role of a bodyguard for many, because by obeying the rules children easily become being protected from dangerous situations which can have tremendous effects on their process of formation as an

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, even may damage their whole psychology. One of the drawbacks of

this

approach seems to be decreased opportunities for creativity because of the high proportion of bonds between the feeling of freedom and creativity,

therefore

, some limitations to the restrictions ought to be taken into consideration. Another

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negative side of

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attitude is that

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the ability of effective and efficient decision making of children might lack due to surrounding strict restrictions, and

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may, unfortunately, lead them to feel desperate and look for help from others. In conclusion, despite the fact that there can be various positive results of being upbrought with

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reat variety of regulations, negative consequences of the limited rate of liberty,

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as a respectively descending trend of creativity levels and decisionmaking skills

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parents and people taking care of children to be aware of both pros and cons of highly disciplinary approaches.