There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter -describe the complaints that have been made - say why the reception area is important - say why the reception area could be improved
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you in order to discuss our company's meeting zone. Unfortunately, we got a huge part of emails about our reception from the
partners
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partner's
partners'
las
week. Correct your spelling
last
Consequently
, I believe we must take some measures.
I had learned all letters which clients wrote and I made some statistics for you about what they are unpleasant. Linking Words
First
of all, there is the small space, if we have some Linking Words
conferencions
with lots of competitors, they can't fully have Correct your spelling
conferences
conferencing
relax
and enjoy their some free time. Change the verb form
relaxed
Secondly
, they applied about Linking Words
bad
air-conditioned system, as we live in Add an article
the bad
warm
climate, they want to breeze lightly in our office. Add an article
a warm
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Third
reason is not enough staff at our information desk, only one lady can't service everyone.
After my analysation of Add an article
The third
A third
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the situation
situation
I was searching on the Internet whole 2 days and came with Add a comma
,situation
opinion
how the reception in companies is really important. To start with, it is Correct article usage
an opinion
a
face of Correct article usage
the
company
, Add an article
the company
a company
it's
association Correct your spelling
its
about
us, Change preposition
with
first
impression, after which people will give points to us.
I would like to Linking Words
advice
some challenges which we could do: Replace the word
advise
firstly
, do more open-space territory, buying new tables, sofas, Linking Words
also
we could think about some coffee-break. Linking Words
Then
, it is important to renovate our air-conditioned system fully, because we hadn't done it since Linking Words
2018
year. Change the article
the 2018
Lastly
, we should open Linking Words
additionally
2 new positions to have more staff at our reception or recruiting them on Linking Words
temporary
job for big events.
I am looking forward to answering from you.
Best regards,
MariaAdd an article
the temporary
a temporary
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite