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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

#countries #children #work #people #responsibility
Some people think that children should not
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, while others think that it gives
work
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roup and I think of child will
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 to find and choose the
future
job
. Nowadays teenagers have
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roblem to select their
future
job
. But if they will try some works at the time of
studing
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studying
 at school, they will know to what
work
 they will study. It helps to choose the
next
 place to study.
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tudent went to try some jobs what he selected. There in the
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he spoke with workers and after that
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he chose a
job
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, now children do not think about money and how to earn them. They will understand the money price. Teenagers can help for their parents. They will start to take
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apital,
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what they want to buy. In conclusion, children should try to
work
 to understand what is money and how to use them. It will help to choose the
future
job
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Child labor
  • Exploitation
  • Minimum age
  • Work experience
  • Survival
  • Taking responsibility
  • Education
  • Poverty
  • Legal restrictions
  • Physical toll
  • Psychological impact
  • Cultural perceptions
  • International conventions
  • Economic impact
  • Work-study programs
  • Skilled labor
  • Unskilled labor
  • Developing economies
  • Moral implications
  • Professional development
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