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You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organisers. In your letter:  Explain why you are interest in helping  Give details suitable past experience  Suggest ways you might help with the event

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I am writing in response to the advertisement published in the Times newspaper on 5th December 2020 to
volunteer
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 upcoming charity event.
First
 and foremost, I am glad that I could be a part of
this
 sports match because I have always been waiting to watch a live match between Delhi and Mumbai riders and
finally
 I got
this
 opportunity to watch and
volunteer
 the event.
Further
, I have 10 years of experience as a
volunteer
. I volunteered
many
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 events
such
 as blood donation
camp
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, art gallery and music competitions since I was 18 years old.
Moreover
, I won
best
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volunteer
 award for my contribution
in
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 the blood donation camp recently. Since I am familiar with
this
 kind of work, I can take full responsibility
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 maintaining the cleanliness
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 the ground. I could
also
 arrange logistics for players. I am happy to take other workloads as well. I hope you will consider my application for
this
 noble cause. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Sarah Edmunds
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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