The most important consideration when choosing any job or career is having a high income. To what extent extent do you agree?
It has been opined by many individuals that higher remuneration should be the main focus on choosing a work. I partially agree to it because other factors
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as Linking Words
health
and a Use synonyms
work-life
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balance
are equally important.
To commence with, of course, Use synonyms
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igher
salary is important and most people choose their Correct your spelling
higher
job
based on it. Use synonyms
However
, there are many sides Linking Words
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selecting a higher pay Verify preposition usage
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job
. Some people want higher salaries to earn a high status in Use synonyms
the
society. They would gain fame, recognition and derive a level of satisfaction which drives them in the selection of higher remuneration jobs. Remove the article
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Secondly
, many people want Linking Words
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igher income to support themselves as well as their family. In today's generation, each and every sector Add an article
a
such
as food, housing, medical is becoming expensive and many people die out of hunger. It has Linking Words
also
been found that half of India's population is below the poverty line. So to avail all those benefits, people choose a higher income Linking Words
job
. Use synonyms
For instance
, the cost of Linking Words
health
and food has gradually increased in many places in India in these years, Use synonyms
as a result
of which people are selecting higher pay jobs and sometimes doing part-time jobs along with their full-time to earn their living as well as supporting their families.
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On the other hand
, earning a higher income is not sufficient. There should be a proper Linking Words
work-life
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balance
and a healthy lifestyle because if people do not take care of their Use synonyms
health
, it will become difficult for them to concentrate on their work and show excellent results in their jobs. It has been found that most companies which offer higher pay compromise on the Use synonyms
health
of their employees. The individuals skip meals, sleep late at night and do not get enough time to exercise to keep their bodies fit. Use synonyms
As a result
, they get exposed to a lot of diseases like diabetes, constipation. Linking Words
Also
, they are not able to invest much time for their families Linking Words
as a result
of spending long hours in offices. Linking Words
For instance
, in most of the call-centre jobs in India, people are leading an unhealthy lifestyle because of huge work-pressure and intense level of stress.
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However
, the organization should take care of it. They should provide their employees with proper facilities like holiday's on weekends, fixed working hours, exercising facilities in their offices and organize special tours so that they can relax well before starting their upcoming assignments in their respective offices. Linking Words
Therefore
, it will enable the individual to spend Linking Words
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an
health
's.
To summarise, Use synonyms
although
people select higher paying jobs for a good reputation as well as supporting themselves as well as their families when prices of goods and services are becoming expensive, a Linking Words
job
with a proper Use synonyms
work-life
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balance
is Use synonyms
also
a good idea because it will help in maintaining Linking Words
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proper Remove the article
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health
and a Use synonyms
work-life
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balance
among families.Use synonyms
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