More and more people are working from home rather than at the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but other think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views, and give your own opinion.

In
this
modern era, technology
change
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the
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people's way of
work
. Some people think that
work
from
home
is more beneficial for the employee and their family while others do not.
This
essay will discuss both sides of the argument in details and provide evidence as to why working from
home
is superior.
To begin
with, there are
numerious
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numerous
advantages of it, if people
work
from their accommodation.
Firstly
, they can easily save their travel
time
and spend
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same
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time
with their family and it will improve strong bonding between them.
Secondly
, help can be done by them easily in
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emergency situation and they can easily keep an eye on their children's activity. Mainly, employees can easily focus on the
work
when they are working from their own place
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because they don't need to worry about any other thing at that
time
and it
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on the company's progress ratio.
For example
, in many countries
c
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ompany allows their workers to
work
from
home
, so they can give their best in the job. Due to the
numerious
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numerous
profit of it, the government
also
have to encourage everyone for
this
.
On the contrary
, it
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also
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a few drawbacks. Sometimes, people feel hectic because of the same environment. when they chose
this
way of
work
at that
time
they spend
their
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most of
time
at
home
and they will
interfear
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interfere
in their family member's life and it creates
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roblem for them. Apart from
this
,
this
thing
also
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them away from their colleagues. Summing up,
this
essay discussed how operating
work
from the house is more beneficial for the people and it is
also
profitable for the society as well as for the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Telecommuting
  • Flexi-time
  • Remote work
  • Work-life integration
  • Virtual collaboration
  • Self-discipline
  • Workspace
  • Burnout
  • Ergonomics
  • Time management
  • Distractions
  • Productivity
  • Commuting
  • Connectivity issues
  • Team dynamics
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