Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie. Neccessary to spend money What factors contribute to the success of a movie

In
this
modern society, the
movie
industry is rapidly increased.
Therefore
, compared to a few decades ago, some
film
companies spend a
lot
of
money
for a single
movie
. Because
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there was no
computer
graphics and expensive equipment for movies. In my opinion, some movies are necessary that spend a
lot
of
money
for their movies
such
as actors,
computer
graphics and some specific equipment for movies. In
this
essay, I will explain why
film
companies need to spend millions of dollars on movies.
Firstly
, Some movies need a specific actor for a
movie
.
For instance
, series movies
such
as Ironman and Captain America need specific actors. In consequence of the main characters should be acted by the same actors. In the condition of the actors wanted more
money
to
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in the movies, the
film
company have to charge.
Additionally
, most movies need
computer
graphics.
Furthermore
, if
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igh quality of graphic effects needs for movies, the
film
companies have to spend
money
on that. Some movies need some specific sequence, like tsunami, tornado and earthquake.
In addition
, some of the scientical movies need space backgrounds. For
this
reason,
film
companies should pay for
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igh quality of
computer
graphics, and
this
will lead to spending a
lot
of
money
on producing a
movie
. In conclusion, some people say
that
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film
companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single
movie
is just waste
money
.
However
, I believe some
film
companies should spend a
lot
of
money
on movies. Because
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they need high quality of
computer
graphics
such
as spaces or natural disasters.
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