In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?
It is widely believed that some students struggle to find a job even with highly qualified studies.
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essay will expose the factors that cause Linking Words
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problem and some possible solutions to tackle it.
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, some companies require a lot of Linking Words
experience
before employing new people. Usually, students who just finished their studies do not have enough professional Use synonyms
experience
, as qualifications or diplomas are a must to start working. Use synonyms
For example
, in Colombia, even if people have a master, but no Linking Words
experience
, they will be potentially be rejected by the companies. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in some countries, to start working in a company, people have to have at least two years of Linking Words
experience
, which is not easy to get. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the economic situation in some countries is not the best. Linking Words
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, some companies can not provide enough job positions to fulfil demand.
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However
, these problems can be overcome if the Linking Words
government
engages with new approaches to benefit highly qualified graduates. Use synonyms
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government
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less
taxes to the companies employing young and people without Change the quantifier
fewer
experience
. Use synonyms
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might be beneficial either for individual or businesses. Linking Words
Also
, if the Linking Words
government
starts funding these companies and helping them Use synonyms
paying
their employees' payroll, it might boost companies interest to employ more people. Change the form of the verb
pay
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ew cases, there are some highly qualified graduates who prefer not to work rather than just get Add an article
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pay
a low salary. In Change the form of the verb
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this
case, a higher salary prospect might encourage them to start working.
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experience
plays a fundamental role in people' job prospects. Use synonyms
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, if the Linking Words
government
engages and commits to stop Use synonyms
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issue and start supporting companies , which employ highly qualified graduates, eventually, Linking Words
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