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Many people today are worried about y oung chi ldren using v ideo games. What problems might these games cause, for chi ldren and society as a whole? How could these problems be reduced?

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Video games are becoming a notorious trend among people.
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 playing video games is an exciting and funny activity,
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 can cause some serious problems both for children and adults.
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 essay will show the problems
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 activity may cause to people and describe possible solutions for
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 an issue. The main dilemma of video games for infants is playing games that are inadequate for them. Unfortunately, there is an increasing number of games sold for children that present harmful content. Not only can children have problems with games, but
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 adults may face some problematic situations. Adults players usually suffer from playing constantly
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 of doing more important tasks. An expressive number of adults is addicted to games and
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 activity can be as harmful as smoking,
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. Constantly searching and being careful about what kind of games youngers are playing is one of the best ways to solve the problem listed above. If parents pay close attention to their children, they would avoid any problem. Adults can manage their time and try to play during a specific moment of the week. Playing games just in
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eisure moment is something positive and do not cause any obstacle to productivity. To sum up, both children and adults can have some problems related to video games. While children can learn harmful content, adults can spend a long time playing and become less productive. To solve these problems, parents should watch their infants and adults should play only during leisure time.
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