in some countries, fast food restaurants and companies give money to schools provided that the schools promote their products to school children what do you think is the positives and negative of this in the development of childeren

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considered

, that many

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manufacturers

and fast food makers in many

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countries

are used to

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sponsor

schools in return for advertisement of their brands to the students there. In my

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the harms related to these products on the

childeren

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children

,s health outweighed the benefits from the paid money. Looking at drawbacks at

first

, young persons especially under 18 years old are unable to

deffirentiate

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differentiate

good items from bad ones.

For instance

, food, they do not have insight about unhealthy

ingradients

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ingredients

that they have to avoid, or even restricted their use to less amount.

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childeren

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children

lack the concept of earning money, they may the

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illusion that

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has free access to these adverts, which make them pester their parents to buy what they need.

However

, the money which is given by the sponsoring companies can be geared toward the institute progress,

such

as buying valuable

equipments

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that can help

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ducation process to go comfortable.

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computers

, boards, desks, and

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projectors.

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ood chance for teachers and educators to direct young candidates' attention about how to make

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ight decision, and how to avoid influence ot others on their choice.

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what they are going

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possess. In conclusion, the negative impact on our children's health from harmful fast food and unreliable products outweighed the best

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investment

of funding given to the school to increase equip facilities.