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Psychologist have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true this statement? How far colour influence people's health and capacity for work? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is certainly true that
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 are necessary for people's life. It has an influence on people's
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recognization in
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their
 daily lives
such
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,consume goods,
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 And, I would agree that people are affected since
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 has many things effect
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 people. One reason why
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 has many tings effect
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 people, especially in hospitals and in offices. In offices, they usually use soft and basic
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, or light
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 like white and grey,
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 light blue. They use these
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beacuse
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because
 they are simple
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and
 they give effect to control human mood to do the best for their job. These
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 will help the room look more spacious and quiet. On the hand, some offices use dynamic
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such
 as red,yellow,orange , green. These
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 give more ideas for
peole
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people
 who are creative. They give people a healthy workspace and provide energy for people who are working tirelessly. So it is a good choice to stir up excitement.Another reason, why
this
 is agreed upon is that people, either patient or
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visitor
visitors
 can pay attention to the
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 around them . In
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ospital, people usually paint white or green
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beacause
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because
 white
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 show lightness , relaxation to people. They
also
 show respect when we go into
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ospital. White built the mood of patients to recover from their disease.
This
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 will give patients the
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impressions
impression
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about
labour
 caml, so they will take a rest or sleep with
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quietness
.In
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, It is
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 that
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affect
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effect
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 for human
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, mood and
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feeling
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, especially the
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 you like will
also
 make you feel happy when you look at it. So we
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decorate anything,
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 is important to choose carefully
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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