Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. "Do you think" the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?"

To begin

with, every student has a dream which is being a student of one of the top rank school for their future.

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issue brings new requirements

such

as moving

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another country. It is undeniable that the

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beneficial

effects of living abroad overpower the detrimental ones. And,

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elevant explanation.

Firstly

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that living abroad brings along new experiences and new cultures.

For example

, an individual who is studying in another country is able to learn things about the place and

also

, he or she can get used to the new traditions, religions, cuisines and so on easily. These features make a person open-minded that,

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enormous

advantage in

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professional life.

Furthermore

, students who decided to study abroad have to live apart from

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families

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indeed the great

oppurtunity

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opportunity

for them. Living alone obliges young adults to

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their daily basis activity to survive and clean household by oneself.

For instance

, the shopping has to be done by someone and, if a student lives alone, he or she has to handle it. It is irrefutable that it is

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extremely

good effects on the students

such

as he/she become a master of the household economy.

On the other hand

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and foremost,

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choice can cause

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etrimental impact of the family budget. Living cost,

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tuition

and extra fees require a remarkable amount of money. It is

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obvious

that not everybody is very much lucky as affording total costs. The economic situation of families forces parents to work hard and more. To conclude, moving

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another country for

studing

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studying

is resulted to make a person open-minded and more powerful on daily living things.

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conomical effects on families is a thing. I believe that the

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beneficial

effects overpower the detrimental ones.