Write about the following topic: A government’s role is only to provide defence capability and urban infrastructure (roads, water supplies, etc.). All other services (education, health, social security) should be provided by private groups or individuals in the community. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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vastly interested in their
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and it's duties. Many believe
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esponsibility of the
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is to cover the basic needs of the nation.
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, essential services must be privatised. I am a strong advocate of
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dvantages of benefits of nationalisation and privatisation.
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, the infrastructure can lay the groundwork for the sustainable
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goals of a country. To accomplish
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goal requires a strenuous effort.
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,
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involvement is important in providing necessary roads, water supplies to the general public.
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, building a road in a rural area with poor access and no facilities can be an arduous task for a private company.
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, national security should not be in the hands of a private company as it is the utmost priority. For an instance, every country allocates sufficient sum of funds to
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in their annual budget because it is the most needed services.
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, depending on private companies and personnel to establish
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important divisions i.e. medical, education etc. can create a monopoly and result in deprivation of these facilities for underprivileged people.
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, the private owner will develop any of the hospitals for commercial purposes and the poor people won’t be able to afford that treatment.
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private people should not be given the sole responsibility to manage these core sectors.
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, it can be seen that giving individual companies
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major role could sabotage the lives of underserved people of
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society. In a nutshell, the resources present with the state and cartel thinking of individuals should be kept in mind by the state authorities for developing or upgrading country. I do believe that the state should be completely responsible for building the basic necessities concerning their
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life and health. I suppose, going another way round could complicate the problems for sitting
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as private individuals could be involved in blackmailing in case their demands are not met.
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