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Some people believe that technology has made man more social and others think that it has made us less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #technology #man
The development of technology has changed individual social life into a better form while others turn into lonely. Unsurprisingly,
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ew version of social websites provides services and opportunities widely to meet people from every corner of the
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pposite sex.
Moreover
, they are
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 used as a secret channel to share the subjects anonymously and to mock each other. It seems those technologies support mankind to be sociable and well-known far beyond the community they belong to.
On the other hand
, it is highly likely possible that social media influencers are weak in
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world
 communication. They might miss a chance to greet people on their sight and might not notice who are
next
 to them as they are caught in their devices. They are possibly influenced by
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irtual environment and forget about the real
world
. From my point of view, technology provides us
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amazing social experiences and
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 our network globally.
However
, plenty of fake accounts and imitation relationship lead to be lonely when it ends. To communicate in real life is
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 important to improve our social skill. In conclusion, it is true that technology plays a key role in social ability. But there are side effects of it if we are less attention
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 our own society and being in
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irtual
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 entirely. I prefer being
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eal
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 than meeting people virtually.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social interaction
  • connect
  • communicate
  • video conferencing
  • stay in touch
  • online communities
  • forums
  • like-minded individuals
  • global communication
  • collaboration
  • access to information
  • knowledge
  • bridge the gap
  • social isolation
  • detachment
  • face-to-face communication
  • genuine human connection
  • maintain
  • real-life interactions
  • balance
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