In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What can be done to change thus?

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in the use of resources.
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has boomed the amount of
waste
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as
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, glass and aluminium cans.
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essay will discuss the causes for countries who do not recycle their
waste
and
also
suggest solutions on how to encourage them. In recent years, the wastes piles in many countries are growing higher than the actual mountains.
This
is primarily due to
lack
of knowledge of recycling. People in many countries are not aware
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the concept of recycling and reusing
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waste
.
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ack of funds to invest in
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for recycling is
also
an issue. Due to
this
, there is
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ack of labour force.
For example
, recently I met my friend who wants to eagerly reduce the aluminium cans
waste
piles in the city by investing in
a recycling equipment
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recycling equipment
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.
However
, due to
lack
of funds, his wish has been yet left unfulfilled. One of the
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is to introduce people with the idea of recycling and reusing. Children in schools must be educated about
this
topic.
In addition
, awareness about recycling
waste
materials should be spread in each neighbourhood by conducting awareness campaigns and through advertisements. The government must
also
financially support various organisations who are eager to build recycling plants.
For example
, my cousin, with the help of government funds was able to buy a
paper
recycling machine.
This
has significantly reduced the amount of
paper
waste
in the city and
also
encouraged people to use recycled
paper
. In conclusion, even today many countries do not recycle their
waste
such
as
paper
, glass and aluminium cans.
This
is possibly due to
lack
of knowledge of recycling,
lack
of funds and labour force.
This
problem can be solved by introducing people to recycling
waste
, spreading awareness and
also
by government support.
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