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A lot of people spend a major part of their adult life at work, so job satisfaction is very important for individual happiness. What are the main factors that contribute to job satisfaction? What are the possible solutions for people who are unsatisfied with their jobs?

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In today’s modern world,
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ajority of the people spend a huge part of their adult
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 into their career.
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 satisfaction is crucially important for an individual. Some people are very happy with their
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,
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, many people are not mentally satisfied with their
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. I will discuss some of the factors that lead to
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 satisfaction and
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 give some solutions to those who are not satisfied. To
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 with,
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 satisfaction depends on several appropriate reasons.
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 of all, attractive salary is one of the best reason. Because
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 people
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 for money to maintain a happy
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. When
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 they see their earnings make a change in their
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 as well as they
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 save some cash for
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uture.
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hing gives people mentally peace.
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, the working environment plays a crucial role in
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 pleasure. Employees need an atmosphere which is safe and healthy. Where
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 every staff can
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 together with
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ew vision.
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 but not least,
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 security is another best way to increase worker
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fulfillment
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. If they feel secure in their
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, they will become more motivated towards
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.
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, some worker
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 not satisfied in their
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work place
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. Because
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 they cannot manage everything correctly. In that case, they must improve their communication skills with their colleagues as well as superiors.
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, these things will improve their mind
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work
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. Even, They will be more passionate
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work
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.
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, daily exercise can change
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 human mind very fast. Exercise not only increase people physical energy but it
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 an impact on peoples mental health. Admittedly, they will be more confident and satisfied with whatever they have. To conclude, it is not easy to be happy all the time. People should control their expectation in all aspects.
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, they will be
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 in professional
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