Some people say that educational success most of the time depends on having a good teacher, others say that student attitudes also do matters.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Teachers are the best tutors and are amongst the most respected one's in our life because most of our
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depends upon our education.
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people are of the opinion that the
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attitudes
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matters.
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oin. Teachers do play a pivotal role in accumulating
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by an individual by teaching him/her the lessons of life throughout their academics.
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if there is no
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people will not be able to study on their own. But at the same time
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the
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of the
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also
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matters to achieve
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. As there
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different attitudes towards studies of different students. A studious and promising
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the
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to study will automatically have
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interest and only
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will pay attention
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what is being taught by the
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. But
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a
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egative
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towards studies won't even listen to the
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as per opinion is concerned, I personally believe that its the
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of the
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which matters the most because the
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is always equal with every
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of the class but its the real
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of the
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which either makes or breaks his
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