Some people think that females shouldn’t allow in the military force whereas some think that they should give them chance. So what extent do you agree or disagree.

Even though females have set their feet in all walks of life, yet

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rmy is still a male dominant occupation and the recruitment of women is always questioned.

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, I believe women should

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ncouraged to work in the sector of

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, despite they may have to face limitation as well. The prominent reason due to which females deserve to be a part of the army as equal to males is changed warfare, to put it simply, these days automatic weapons are used in the battles, for those we need knowledge and education about technology, as

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overnment is providing equal educational opportunities to both genders. So, women have the same potential as well as knowledge to use any weapon. Apart from

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of enrolling females in the

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sector, because of their calm and tender nature. To be clear, women have naturally less aggressive nature and

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as these qualities are blessing in every force. Since

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they can take any decision patiently which assist to reduce the conflicts and build strong relationships among nations.

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that

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profession is one of the deadliest ones in the tensed times as sometimes during

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ar, military force has to live in

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ostile environment for

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ong time, As we know, females are emotionally as well as physically weaker than males,

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, the chances of exploitation like sexual harassment more likely to happen within

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ype of situations.

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, women would not only give up

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but

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reduce the

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of

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soldiers. To Sum,

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recruiting females in the army

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few disadvantages,

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overnment should come forward to motivate and implement strict rules for them in the

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sector. So, that they can equally contribute

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the military field,

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ame as they are doing in the other sectors.