In the last century, The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, some people think it has made little difference in most people’s daily lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although

,

Mankind

believed that the early foot on the moon was an achievement to

Mankind

. I support

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for some reasons. My position is argued

further

with the explanation. Out of all the bases, the foremost one was the immense fortune of

Mankind

which brings endless opportunities to explore. To elaborate, It brings hope of a new place to colonise and expand. Considering the population of

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the world the area is not enough to accommodate.

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, the

first

move towards the neighbour planet gives us

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an opportunity to meet

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extraterrestrial people if they exist.

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extending our boundaries to step forward,

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brings the

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location to learn and diversify by experimenting and nurturing in a better way.

Additionally

, I believe in case of doms

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or nuclear war the

first

shelter

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the human species would be

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than the moon .

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is because

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day-by-day conflicts between

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first

world countries are at their peak.

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, with the proud claim of the

first

step on m soon,it gives the ability to think out of our globe and proves the efficiency to search the other planets and universe.

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NASA sent

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apollo

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11 for its

first

footstep to the moon and they succeeded. By considering it

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the ability to send

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mars.

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I would not overlook the other side too.

To begin

with, I believe a claim to stride forward humanity did not make any significant difference in

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lives.

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, Keeping in mind the achievement it will take decades to move, and technology is not up to the pace yet.

Also

, it does not make any difference because many nations are in the developing stage.

Thus

,

to conclude

the discussion, it can be

finally

said that despite the fact of not making any major

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in daily life, I believe a step forward is just the beginning, and it will help

Mankind

to achieve future endeavours.