Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a school of thought that believes that the construction of

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roads would reduce

traffic

jam. While

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reasons can be given to justify

this

, I would argue that railways and

subway

lines are more efficient than the mentioned method. On the one hand, there are those who assert that building a

number

of wider roads would solve

traffic

congestion.

Firstly

, a wide road, which has

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arge

street

area , would allow a large

number

of vehicles to travel on that road.

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would alleviate several typical

traffic

congestion caused by

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ottleneck in narrow area streets. Truong Chinh, a narrow

street

in Hanoi, has long been a commonplace

street

for

traffic

jam since it has

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ery small road area.

Secondly

, the increase in the

number

of wider roads would help to reduce

traffic

flows at several streets in rush hours.

This

would contribute greatly to the mitigation of too crowed vehicles on a

street

.

On the other hand

, I side with those who contend that railways and

subway

lines would be more beneficial to the cities infrastructure in term of

traffic

. Railway, which is well-known for an efficient public means of transport , would result in less private vehicles on the streets.

Therefore

, it would tremendously solve perennial problems of

traffic

jam.

Furthermore

, since trains and

subway

trains are centralized controlled, the possibility for congestions and accidents would be extremely low. The results not only reduce

traffic

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but are safer and more convenient for local people as well. In conclusion,

although

it is true that the increase in the

number

of wider roads would alleviate the problem of congestion, I firmly believe that the construction of train and

subway

lines is a durable solution for solving that problem.