Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a school of thought that believes that the construction of

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roads would reduce

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reasons can be given to justify

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, I would argue that railways and

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lines are more efficient than the mentioned method. On the one hand, there are those who assert that building a

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of wider roads would solve

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congestion.

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, a wide road, which has

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area , would allow a large

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of vehicles to travel on that road.

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would alleviate several typical

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congestion caused by

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ottleneck in narrow area streets. Truong Chinh, a narrow

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in Hanoi, has long been a commonplace

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jam since it has

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ery small road area.

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, the increase in the

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of wider roads would help to reduce

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flows at several streets in rush hours.

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would contribute greatly to the mitigation of too crowed vehicles on a

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, I side with those who contend that railways and

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lines would be more beneficial to the cities infrastructure in term of

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. Railway, which is well-known for an efficient public means of transport , would result in less private vehicles on the streets.

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, it would tremendously solve perennial problems of

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jam.

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, since trains and

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trains are centralized controlled, the possibility for congestions and accidents would be extremely low. The results not only reduce

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flows on

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but are safer and more convenient for local people as well. In conclusion,

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it is true that the increase in the

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of wider roads would alleviate the problem of congestion, I firmly believe that the construction of train and

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lines is a durable solution for solving that problem.