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I am writing to express my interest in the position of Civil Engineer, and have enclosed my CV for your reference.

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I was offered the role of a Junior Engineer in a Private Consultancy Firm, where I worked for more than a year in various projects in the areas of Estimation, Drafting and Site supervision with the help of the technical software skills in AutoCAD, REVIT, STAAD.PRO and Microsoft Excel. I
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 had an apprenticeship training in Vikram Sarabhai Space Centre where I was exposed in the various fields of estimation of buildings, roads and sewage treatment plant, analysis and design of RCC framed and
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 structures including Retaining walls, preparation of master plan in QGIS software including GIS mapping and Site supervision. I am confident that my skills and experience coupled with my academic qualifications will enable me to become a competent civil engineer and I look forward to the opportunity to discuss the position in detail. If you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thank you very much for your consideration. Sincerely, Jyothi Mary Philip
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