In order to learn the way other people in the world lives, it is better to look at film and video records than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that it is better to watch movie and people can access more to the pictured documents which
video
records to learn the way
other people in the world
than read written documents. I agree to a certain extent with this
view. While there may be drawbacks with looking at films in the past, it seems to me that it is more likely to have beneficial impacts.
On the one hand, looking at written documents was b
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way
other people in the world
lives in the past. Firstly
, most documents which ordinary people can access are written ones. As a result
, these people can look at them in order to know about the way
other people in the world
lives. Secondly
, when people publish, they used written documents most of t
ime. Add an article
the
This
is because people do not have state-of-art technology such
as computers.
On the other hand
, it is better to know about the way
other people in the world
through video
records now. The first
reason for this
is that thanks to the
technological development, many people can access to the internet which allows them to easily obtain information. Remove the article
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Additionally
, people can visually understand looking at films and video
records. For example
, even though people do not know other foreign languages, picture in the films could help them to understand the contents.
In conclusion, while it is true that written documents were useful in the past, in my opinion, the advantages of this
looking at films and video
record to learn the way
other people in the world
outweigh the disadvantages,
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