In order to learn the way other people in the world lives, it is better to look at film and video records than written documents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that it is better to watch movie and

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records to learn the

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than read written documents. I agree to a certain extent with

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view. While there may be drawbacks with looking at films in the past, it seems to me that it is more likely to have beneficial impacts. On the one hand, looking at written documents was

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etter method to learn the

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lives in the past.

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, most documents which ordinary people can access are written ones.

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, these people can look at them in order to know about the

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other people in the

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lives.

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, when people publish, they used written documents most of

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ime.

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is because people do not have state-of-art technology

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as computers.

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, it is better to know about the

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other people in the

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through

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records now. The

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reason for

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is that thanks to

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technological development, many people can access to the internet which allows them to easily obtain information.

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, people can visually understand looking at films and

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records.

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, even though people do not know other foreign languages, picture in the films could help them to understand the contents. In conclusion, while it is true that written documents were useful in the past, in my opinion, the advantages of

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looking at films and

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record to learn the

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other people in the

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outweigh the disadvantages

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when considering that lately

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people can access more to the pictured documents which

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easier to understand for them.