Developed countries have created many environmental problems. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?".

A number of
environment
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issues have been produced
bythe
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by the
developed nations.The following essay represents
the
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some potential measures to
allivate
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alleviate
this
problem.
Firstly
and foremost, a
developmemt
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development
comes to a cost which
have
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to
bepaid
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be paid
by all the living things on the
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earth,and advanced economies are doing it without considering the detrimental effect of
industralization
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industrialization
.
Hence
fix sets of
guildlines
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guidelines
should be created by
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nternational organization like
U
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nited Nations. If any country violates the criteria
then
r
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espective nation must be.
For instance
, a few years ago, a cargo, which was carrying crude oil, met with an accident during his journey by sea.An oil widespread in the whole ocean and impacted badly to the living creatures of the water.So, United Nation instructed Britain to
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cleanup
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whole mess and gives
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enalty of
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lantation of trees in 100 hector soil in
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K. In
this
way we a punishment it
such
a way that it would
benifit
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benefit
the global climate.
Secondly
,an initiative should be taken by the
first
world
coutries
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countries
in order to reduce the emission of harmful gases;
however
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it is not necessary to close the industries.It can be done by the blessings of the technology.A more advance
as well as efficient engines
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should be used for the vehicles,which lessen the emission of damaging gases.
Besides
,an alternative of fuel cars,
an
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electric cars,
also
can be
s
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ound solution to an encounter the big mountain problem. To put in
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utshell, the repercussions of
the
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global warming can be reduced with help of
a
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new innovations and creating and obeying the rules which
restrics
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restricts
restrict
the blind run behind the development of
an
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nation.
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