Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is thought by many that High
salary
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package is preferable as compared to the sense of
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satisfaction
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. I completely disagree with the statement because
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satisfaction
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gives
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and
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, it leads individuals on the path on growth.
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, no money can guarantee the
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that people get while doing a
job
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of their choice. To illustrate, while pursuing the task of their
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, people do not feel tired and pressurized.
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, some people give preference to jobs that offer
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igh
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, to make their standard of living better and many a time compromise with their conscience, for the sake of money and remain pressurized and tensed all the time.
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, many people choose research work and spend important years of life in laboratories because they are passionate
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it and want to do something better for the society not because it offers them
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etter
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.
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, the jobs of personal
interest
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and liking lead to individuals on the path of growth.
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, when individuals choose
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ob of their
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as a
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, better performance and results are guaranteed.
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, Salim Khan started his
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as a film actor but later on
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he decided to pursue his
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as
s
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tory writer because he was more interested and comfortable in it.
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, he became the number one story writer of Indian cinema during 1980-1990. To conclude, while choosing a
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or occupation as a
career
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, people should put their
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and liking affront and try to choose
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. If one
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ob only on the basis high
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, he or she may have to repent in the
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part of his life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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