Writing Task 1: You wish to apply for a new training programme that is sponsored by your company. Write a letter to your manager: • Explaining about the training program • Explaining why it is important to your work • Requesting him for approving your time off Start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam,

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Dear Sir, I have been working

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the same project for almost 2 years . I would

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tolike

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explore few opportunities from my current role, so I have enrolled for Phyton training and will be on leave from 15th December to 17th December. I would like to give details about

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training. It is basically 3 days course.

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training covers all the basics of python and all the coding languages. It

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gives

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brief idea

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how

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python can be used in different applications and systems . As you are aware I always wanted to learn phyton, but I was lacking

basics

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of coding and

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month I have completed training in

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coding I am able to

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for phyton as per my interest. After completing

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particular training . I will be able to apply for the position of developer in our company and work

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I would request you to approve my leave for the training . I have already completed all my assignments on time and explained

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to my

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team mates

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so that they can handle

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them in

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my absence.

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Sincerely Deepthi Hegde

deepthikamath123Wed Dec 16 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

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