Police in some countries like England don't carry guns. Some people don't approve of this because they think that police with guns gives them security. Others think that police carrying guns decreases crimes. What is your opinion? Give relevant examples and experiences.

Police
, as protectors of his people, should do what they can, and use whatever means they can, to keep people out of harm‘s way. But in the UK,
police
are on duty without carrying a
gun
, which is a very bad idea. They are handicapping themselves. Generally speaking,
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un is recognized as an emblem of power and justice of
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is able to prevent those potential criminal activities.
For instance
, a pistol on the belt works effectively to stop crimes ranging from those robberies, theft, and rape and it can
also
force the criminals to be arrested.
Furthermore
,
gun
serves for a reliable friend while the
police
crash into an emergent situation like
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or commotion. Guns are not expected to be employed to finish off the chaos but to help the
police
survive before the reinforcement comes. Meanwhile, the violence rate is rising in
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global terrorism. Unlike the ordinary gangster and robbers who is armed daggers and knives, a large number of international terrorists are equipped with semi-auto rifles and massive destruction weapons. Proper measures must be taken to limit the uneven contrast of power and the great efforts should be made to protect
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from the harm of terrorist attack.
However
, there is an old saying “combat poison with poison”, say, an overall upgrading of UK
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couldn’t be better to meet the needs. It is all necessary that every
police
carries a pistol while they are on duty, which would be the practicable way to ensure
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public security in Briton. As a consequence, having carry guns by
police
will evidently benefit people in
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K, and of which will lead to a more steady and harmonic society. If there must be a controversy, it would go to whether the government should place a curb upon the possible abuse of
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