You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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letter regarding
an
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apply

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accommodation requirements. I am very much excited as I took
admission
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the admission

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for a
1 month
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1-month

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short Design course. My name is Kailash kamble. I am
young
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a young

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and
engergetic
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energetic

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student from
india
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India

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and recently I completed my admission process with the institute. Currently, I am worried about my accommodation needs.
Hence
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, I am writing
this
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letter to make sure my requirements
done
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are done

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correctly. Since, as you know
this
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is
short
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a short

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course and
requirement
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the requirement

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is only for short period. My course is related to customers experience which is named
as
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apply

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UX/UI. I will arrive on 12th January 2020 and my departure date is15th
february
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February

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2020. My requirement is a furnished basement flat which
having
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has

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24 hours hot water along with
heater
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the heater
a heater

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. If possible located in
low
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a low

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noisy area and economical as well. Whatever documents
required
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are required

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to complete
this
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procedure I will send it to you by
an
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apply

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email on high priority. If you do it on priority it
well
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will

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have
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has

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great
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a great

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help for me. Look forward
for
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to

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reply
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the reply
a reply

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, Your's faithfully, Kailash Kamble

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