You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, give details of your course and your arrival/departure date explain your accommodation needs ask for information about getting to and from the college

#course #college #accommodation #officer #departure #date #information

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter regarding

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accommodation requirements. I am very much excited as I took

admission

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the admission

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for a

1 month

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short Design course. My name is Kailash kamble. I am

young

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and

engergetic

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energetic

student from

india

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India

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and recently I completed my admission process with the institute. Currently, I am worried about my accommodation needs.

Hence

, I am writing

this

letter to make sure my requirements

done

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correctly. Since, as you know

this

short

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a short

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course and

requirement

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the requirement

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is only for short period. My course is related to customers experience which is named

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UX/UI. I will arrive on 12th January 2020 and my departure date is15th

february

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February

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2020. My requirement is a furnished basement flat which

having

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24 hours hot water along with

heater

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the heater

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. If possible located in

low

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noisy area and economical as well. Whatever documents

required

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to complete

this

procedure I will send it to you by

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email on high priority. If you do it on priority it

well

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will

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have

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great

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help for me. Look forward

for

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the reply

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, Your's faithfully, Kailash Kamble

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

179 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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