Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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Needless to say, the vehicle is not a luxury item for everyone in
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modern-day, the problem of traffic congestion have raised over the
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couple decade. I believe that issue is happening in every urban. I will attempt to outline the reason and provide several solutions. To commence with, no one can argue with the fact that, as the population are enhancing quicker than the
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time. the private motor ownership has been increasing with the high population density,
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to say, the traffic jam
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frequently at peak hours.
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, every day I have dropped my motor to my workplace in the morning, I have to spend another 20 mines on land cove road because of the overpopulation.
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, in some metropolis don’t have a perfect public transit system. There don’t have multiple choice for their main transit which leads most individuals to use their
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for their main commute
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, there have some methods for authority to solve
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problem. the local officials can develop local integrate system of public
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in order to decrease people over-rely on their private vehicle.
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, the Sydney government is pinning to expand the Sydney Metro from the north to the South,
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to say, there has more suburb can travel to the city by public
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, the authority can announce a policy to restrict the private
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drivers in the city and use tram, bus and bike
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of the
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policy can avoid a huge number of
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ar driving into the city during peak hours. To sum up, we can confirm that congestion happens in a lot of metropolia. While the government have a responsibility to promote public
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