Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Needless to say,
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ehicle is not a luxury item for everyone in
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modern-day, the problem of traffic congestion have raised over the
last
couple decade. I believe that issue is happening in every urban. I will attempt to outline the reason and provide several solutions. To commence with, no one can argue with the fact that, as the population are enhancing quicker than the
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time. the private
car
ownership has been increasing with the high population density,
that is
to say, the traffic congestion
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frequently at peak hours.
For example
, every day I have dropped my
car
to my workplace in the morning, I have
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spent another
20 mines on land cove road because of the congestion.
Moreover
, in some metropolis don’t have a perfect public
transport
system. There don’t have multiple of choice for their main
transport
which leads most individuals
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se their
car
for their main commute
transport
.
However
, there have some methods for authority to solve
this
problem. the local officials can develop local integrate system of public
transport
in order to decrease people over-rely on their private vehicle.
For instance
, Sydney government is pinning to expand the Sydney Metro from the north to the South,
that is
to say, there has more suburb can travel to
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ity by public
transport
.
Moreover
, the authority can announce a policy to restrict the private
car
drive in
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ity and use tram, bus and bike
instead
of
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ar. So
this
policy can avoid
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uge number of
car
driving
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city during the peak hours. To sum up, we can confirm that the traffic jam
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in a lot of
metropolis
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. While the government have a responsibility to promote public transit in order to solve
this
problem.
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