Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life. Why this trend is occurring? What are the impacts of this development on both family and society?

The perfect time to become parents is a hotly debated topic that always divides opinion. Nowadays, most of the couples are deciding to have children older. There are some reasons why
this
is happening and
also
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onsequences of
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decision
. One of the reasons families are opting by having children later in
life
is that they are focusing on professional
life
. The main phase of career development for men and women is, usually, from early
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to late
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and, those
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the professional goal comes at
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decide to postpone the “parental
life
”. Another reason is that some partners prefer to have a financial infrastructure before taking the responsibility
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generate
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a new
life
.
Additionally
, new technologies
also
play their roles in
this
important
decision
, as
for example
, the possibility of frozen young eggs to fertilize in the future, so women may have a chance of having a healthier newborn even giving birth later in
life
.
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decision
affects more those who
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, there
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also
a significant impact on society. The impact on families could be felt right after
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birth when parents may have an evident lack of energy to handle the child routine.
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, rise a child on a financial and emotional fully supported environment could make a considerable difference
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. In terms of society, the effect may cause some concern. The fact of having children later may encourage couples to have fewer kids,
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the community may become older causing problems on economic and health systems. In the light of
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bove, the
decision
of the better time to have children may cause a deep impact on parents
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ive and
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result in a long-term problem for
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society.
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