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: Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

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There is a widespread belief that any prospective forms of global warming will be harmful to
business
. In my opinion, serve
weather
 may negatively affect
business
 while it benefits eco-friendly companies. Global warming affects directly a
change
 of costs and resource availability, creating an extreme condition for unsustainable
business
.
Such
 condition increases the frequency and intensities of extreme
weather
 events
such
 as floods, storms, and droughts, which
consequently
 disrupt the operation of the
business
. Serve drought and
weather
 pattern changes cause a shortage of crops used for food or apparel products, along with an increase in transportation expenses. Mainly, serve
weather
 is a reason that
climate
change
 is a risk for a
business
 in terms of physical and financial damage. Others argue that
climate
change
 is beneficial for eco-friendly businesses. As
climate
change
, customer demand in the market will simultaneously shift. The customer will be more conscious of environmental protection, increasing the choice of green products. A justification is that a large global movement to reduce the use of plastic bags is profitable for paper-bag produced companies.
In addition
, a
business
 that provides bike rentals or sells eco-friendly vehicles will surprisingly increase the sale due to a
change
 of sustainable transports during
climate
change
. Indeed, whether policies regarding
climate
change
 affect the
business
 positively or negatively is subject to the type of
business
 they are doing. On the one hand, businesses that traditionally produced eco-unfriendly items might suffer from the
change
, including public pressure.
On the other hand
, green businesses might benefit from
such
 political moves. Neither all companies would suffer nor benefit from a certain
change
 of the state. In conclusion, the green
business
 model may take advantage of
climate
change
 while eco-unfriendly will face
multidimensional
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 damage.
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